I asked some students from my target audience to have a look at my flat plan and tell me their thoughts on it, this is the feedback I have received:
Angelie: I like the overall layout of the flat plan and used
the space wisely however I think you could include an element to make the
double page spread cohesive with the content and the front page.
Rubab: I like the overall look of your flat plans as I think
it links well with your genre of Alternative Rock. I also like the drawings and
general idea of your shots as it suits well. I think you could create a
stronger link your pages though.
Hannah: I like your flat plan because it shows what genre it
represents. I like the double page spread a lot as it is simple but effective.
Trisha: Overall I really like the layout of your cover and I
really like the masthead and the font. I also like the spacing of the contents
and front cover
Hibah: I really like
the graphics and I think the masthead and model pose really suit the genre
Sana: I think the contents page is really simple and ‘rock’
looking
Anmol: I love the double
page spread it is set out really nicely
Shivani: I like the layout and simplicity of it. I especially
like the contents page as it is different and eye-catching. It fits the genre
well, especially the title.
Naomi: I think that the layout for the contents page is
creative, the front page fits the genre well.
This feedback will help me to make my magazine look as good as possible and I can take into account their thoughts because they're from my target audience so I will make sure to keep certain aspects of my magazine and possibly discard others if they don't fit.
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