I asked some people in my media class for feedback on my contents page so far and this is the response I received:
From this feedback I am going to act on it and maybe make some changes to the page, especially if I agree with any of the comments on what I could improve e.g. adding more detail under some of the features of the magazine.
The feedback from Halle suggesting that I make the 'Contents' look more prominent has affected some decisions I made, for this I have added a grey bar behind the title to help it stand out more:
Hannah's feedback suggesting that I add more detail under some of the features of the magazine has also helped me make improvements and changes as under the 'Reviews' section each subheading has some form of detail or description underneath it:
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